Is it weird that the preload image looks like low-end CG to me? Also, his jacket is way too big for him and it makes him look like a little boy in dad's clothes.
Why does he put quotes on "dentist"? Is his friend not really a dentist? Is he one of those back-alley dentists who pull teeth with pliers in their his garage?
Amazing how you managed to get such clear audio from the women in a turbulent environment like that without using lavalieres I mean, they couldn't have been wearing lavalieres because this clearly wasn't staged, right? Perhaps the NSA would be interested in the advanced focal recording technology you used here to isolate audio in a loud bar environment.
At first I listen to what he says but it soon (within the first 4 words) becomes "blah blah blah baiting blah blah single girls blah game blah barf".
Oh and be sure to get the name of the club in the shot bro.